Post #41 [Greatest Mog on Earth]

Posted by Greatest Mog On Earth (Member # 309) on :

The dark shadow of Smidgen passed over Bob. Bob stared up in absolute horror.

"Well, It looks like this is the end of me. Hey, I wonder if they have donuts in heaven." Thought Bob, although he doubted if he was going to go there.

[Yeah, its a damn good thing you DON'T die here Bob. :P]

Of course, Bob didn't die, because we're not allowed to kill each other's ACs, so instead, I'll have Brett attack Smidgen's flap of skin in a nick of time.

[XD. I kinda like the oddness of how this was worded, and how it mentions of the "No killing each others' ACs without permission" thing. At least most of we 'Frozenites' tried to follow the rules to our best knowledge, unlike many Tenguian-era writers (or people when they were still in the Tenguian era anyways).]

"Well, I'm glad I'm not dead, but my leg still hurts. Stupid broken leg. Hey, I wonder how much money I got." He thought, and his thoughts turned to The money he had so unfairly stolen from the guy at the ATM.

[One thing GMOE did really well was getting some of Bob's thought processes down, despite not know likely TOO much about Bob at this point. Bob indeed had a lot of chemical inbalances and is one of my favorite ACs in this IF who wasn't one of mine. >.>]

Meanwhile, the battle raged on. "PYROWAVE!" Shouted WareGrowlithemon, And a huge blast of fire shot at Smidgen's flap of skin.

"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" Screamed Smidgen, beginning regeneration and turning around to face it's assaillant, which was stupid, as at that time, Zac used his Ion Cannon on the weak flap of skin.

Yes, things were looking bad for Smidgen. They had discovered his weak point and were doing a good job at exploiting it. The battle raged on, and finally, Kyle grabbed Excalabur, lifted it above Smidgen, drove it deep into that weak flap of skin, defeating Smidgen.

As smidgen lay on the ground, colored with neon green blood, Greatest Mog On Earth took notice Homicidal Bob, lying on the ground with a broken leg.

[Neon-green blood? o.O Well, that's one thing Kirby and Buu really DIDN'T do, which was bleed.]

"Hey, it's a Teddy Bear!" said Bob, as GMOE flew over him. He said "I wonder if it can-" "Hold still, this might hurt." GMOE cut him off as he grabbed Bob's broken leg and began to glow.

"Well, what did that do except hurt me!?" Demanded Bob.

GMOE just grinned and said "Stand up."

"What?! You've gottat be crazy! I'll just hurt myself more! Crazy cat thing..."

[GMOE is still getting called "Teddy-Cat" sometimes. XD And it's even more obvious Bob never played many video games since he doesn't recognize GMOE as a Moogle.]

GMOE lifted Bob to his feet, and, to Bob's delight, it didn't hurt any more. GMOE had healed his wounds.

[Second instance of someone using healing powers in the IF. Still far from the last. :P]

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