Monday, December 7, 2009

Post #15 [DrBoris]

Posted by DrBoris (Member # 565) on :

[mog just so you know plants and inanimate objects are unnafected, only animal life is frozen]

[yeah, a side note here. Although this is mentioned here and assumed, I think we ended up going with the idea that inanimate objects were frozen as well, and you'll see one prominent example in one of my posts later >.>]

The swarms of small fighters were off, and the ships under Boris' command were winning hands down, he was takeing losses however, some of the newer piolets couldn't dodge the capitol ship's fire. Boris's well trained crew went into fighter manuvers with their own battle crusier, within seconds the enemies capitol ship was no longer capable of weapons fire, and its sheilds were showing a bit of degrade. Fight or flight kicked in and the other ship jumped to warp again

[My only possible regret with DrBoris's posts is the general level of grammar. As an idealist, he's very good at coming up with and explaining things, it's just his presentation was lacking. Sorry Boris. :(]

"This is Boris to all crews, disengage and return to the ship, we need to make the warp jump after them ASAP"

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Elsewhere however

The orriginal team who had landed when the ship came under attack was scouting this test in motion. They didn't know their commander had released picto, in fact they assumed their only job was to scout for any flaws in the test, and they had indeed picked up flaws in the test. Life signs were in motion far to the northeast from their landing. They would investigate, and determine what caused the flaws. Their job was not to eliminate, but study, which made them more dangerous in the long run.

[As I said a bit ago, he's good at coming up with thought processes for the various side-characters, it's just he lacked some amount of presentation and sentence structure. I don't mean to "pick nits" or anything, as TWDX said himself in his post earlier.]

They reached the edge of the town where the life signs were, and set up a spying post on a hilltop. What they saw made them ready to flee in terror, but they stayed and watched, if sombody could defeat picto, they would be the strongest and smartest, perfect for useing to determine what the errors in the weapon were.

[Yeah, they're gonna pose our AC heroes more trouble later, but not so much immediately.]

[AC/Post Ratio: 11:15. Major Enemies Introduced: 1]

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